Thread:Sarutobii2/@comment-2140588-20151208111854/@comment-2140588-20151208124803

Sarutobii2 wrote: You combined several chapters of an entire arc into 1 paragraph. It was too long. If it's too long for you, shorten it. Separate paragraphs imply a change in storyline, at least to some extent.

Also, it'd be helpful if you replied to other, following questions.